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Fusion 5

Five years ago, around 10 of us were sat on the Memorial Hall stage after school when Mr. Fry told us the name of the new production – ‘Fusion’. I never thought it rsz_1evey1would still be continuing 5 years on. In the first few years, I accompanied around 5 different acts. This usually meant playing a random instrument at the back whilst someone else shone at the front. For me,’ Fusion’ isn’t about showcasing your own talent, it’s more about being able to do something with your friends and work as a team. This year, as ‘Fusion’ came to a close, I realised that I was satisfied. I was satisfied because I had been able to perform with the people I wanted to perform with, sharing the stage with the friends I’ll miss when I leave to university. Performing isn’t for everybody, but ‘Fusion’ allows people to be involved in all kinds of weird and wonderful ways, and that’s what makes it different to the other theatre performances you see throughout the year.

My advice to those who want to join ‘Fusion’ is to not let anything get in the way of you enjoying yourself. 

 

(Mr. Grime: I added some extra cheese. You can take it out if you’re lactose intolerant.) Eveybarry1IMG_9902[1]

 

 

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Twelve Years a Slave (oops, we mean Stage)

Twelve years is (almost) the length of time the school has been open (2003 – 2015) and the time Ms. Wallace and I have been working in the school. She was very young when we first met, and now….*

Our first production was “A Midsummer Night’s Dream”, not a particularly ambitious choice as far as school productions go, but we ambitiously chose to stage it in the garden by the river, not realising we’d be in competition with speakers from passing tourist boats, the noise from the construction of the Chatrium building, and the rain, which insisted on arriving mid-performance, even though it was December and the rainy season should have been long gone.

Since then there have been more plays, exhibitions, magazines than we can even count, and more highlights than we could ever mention. They are all now on show, in one way or another, in the exhibition called ‘Twelve Years a Stage’, currently in the space in front of the library: thirteen computers showing past productions, a slide show of the best pictures, from Mark and Art as Oberon and Puck, to Deryn and Grace as Top Girls Marlene and Joyce, and posters from productions going way back, the best designed by Khun Peh.

We chose the photo of Yash, Simon, Ben and Jamie as the title poster (from ‘Master Harold and the Boys’) to show a less-than-glossy behind the scenes view, students tired from rehearsing, wolfing down Mars bars to regain energy.

Twelve years is a long time. In 2003, Vegas was in Year 1(in Ms. Snow’s class), I didn’t wear glasses, and Ms. Wallace spoke in an Irish rather than an American accent.  A great deal of creativity has taken place during that time. Thank you to all those who have taken part in all aspects of extra-curricular English during this time, students and staff.

And thank to those who helped in setting up the exhibition: Khun Pornsawan and his team; Khun Mon and the IT team; Khun Peh; Ms. Proctor, James Mulhern, and all in the English Department. Love you dahlings, love your work!

John Grime and Kathy Wallace

*Two sentences have been omitted here at the insistence of Ms. Wallace

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

IMG_9946[1] IMG_9954[1]  IMG_9952[2]IMG_1921[1]IMG_9902[1]See The English Department’s work over the past 12 years outside the library.

 

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The FUSION 2015 photographs. Enjoy!

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Caryl Churchchill’s Top Girls- an abstract, exclusively female play about liberal feminism and England’s political crisis in the late 1970s- I initially thought too ambitious for a cast of predominantly GCSE students. The wet floor signs left standing the following morning, marking the puddles of tears shed during the finale, proved otherwise.  An unnervingly mature performance from Deryn Andrews perfectly captured the essence of Marlene, the ball breaking business woman who sold her soul to the devil, or at least Thatcher. Switching from cold hearted drawl to remorseful plea with such ease and accuracy allowed her to give a much more tormented and generally bitchier portrayal of Marlene than Lesley Manville could muster in the BBC’s 1991 production (not quite the same, but still worth a YouTube).

Grace Chatsuwan gave an equally mature performance as Joyce, the mother of Angie (no spoilers). Despite playing a frumpy middle aged woman, (a difficult task for any actor, let alone a usually chirpy fifteen year old) her final argument with Marlene was arguably the most moving scene of all, and rumored to be responsible for at least half of the aforementioned puddles. Her resentment for her sister’s Bentley was particularly resonant for much of the audience.

Thousands of audience members claimed to have forgotten it was a school production in the copious thank you letters which have since flooded the English office. It would be easy and appropriate to praise each and every woman involved, but it wouldn’t make great reading. The ability to call year 13 veterans such as Deena, Steph and Evey into the smallest parts, allowing the young guns to flourish, is testament to the strength and depth of the cast. A final individual mention, however, must go to Grace Carr and her chilling performance as Angie. Equally as far away from her highly intelligent self as Chatsuwan is from Joyce, Carr straddled this difference with ease, giving a truly chilling finale whilst resisting the temptation to make a caricature of Angie, as many a lesser actor would have done.

Regardless of how chilling a performance Grace Carr gave, such eeriness could never have been created without the artistic genius of John Grime, using the lights to wonderfully creepy effect. It is a true tragedy that such a director has since announced his retirement- a crime in fact, stealing theatre of its brightest jewel. This news is perhaps accountable for the other half of the teary puddles. However, with such an obvious passion for theatre having now directed 48 plays, I think his fans need not fear- his half century is imminent.

To all those reading this review wishing they too had witnessed the definitive production of the SHB calendar- good news. Evey Ong’s photos of the dress rehearsal are almost as good as the real thing, and we will happily dig them out from the mountain of thank you letters in the English office under which they are buried.

Buy or Borrow a Book this Summer!

The English Department would like to know what you read this Summer, so we have set you the following challenge:

 

  1. Go to either a bookshop or a library wherever you are.
  2. Take a photograph of you holding the book you are reading outside the shop or the library.
  3. Email your picture to buyorborrowabook@shrewsbury.in.th  before the start of term.
  4. Include your name and the place you took the photograph.

The History Boys

“Pass the parcel. That’s sometimes all you can do. Take it, feel it and pass it on. Not for me, not for you, but for someone, somewhere, one day. Pass it on boys.”

This is some advice a teacher gives his students in “The History Boys”, and I believe, to some extent, this is the basis of all teaching. Teachers pass on what they know, and students then pass on their knowledge to another generation. You could say this is the basis of all civilisation. We learn from those who have gone before. We learn from our history. Or at least we should.

One of the things ‘The History Boys’ looks at is different teachers and their teaching styles. Should teachers focus on getting their students through exams to the exclusion of other learning? Or should teachers inspire their students well beyond the end of the year, to equip them with knowledge and culture that will go with them for the rest of their lives, long after the exams are forgotten. A gift that goes on giving. One boy, Posner, played by Ben, conveys this dilemma so well when he discusses his personal problems, “Literature is medicine, wisdom. Everything. It isn’t though, is it?”

The play is set in the early Eighties in a boys’ grammar school, where, after their A levels, the boys are taking exams to hopefully find places at Oxford. The last time I taught in England, in the early Eighties, I also taught in a boys’ grammar school and prepared students for a similar exam, though my boys were, I suppose, The English Boys. This was thirty years ago, and things have changed a great deal, and those times, Margaret Thatcher, the Miners’ Strike and music by New Order, are now part of history themselves.

To be able to stage “The History Boys” is a privilege, that we have the actors in school to be able to even cast it: a young teacher just out of college who looks like one of the boys (well, except for his beard), an older teacher on the verge of cracking up, a grumpy old headmaster, a good-looking boy who loves himself, a mild-mannered boy who knows everything there is to know about everything and a boy who plays the piano like ringing a bell. Sounds familiar? Actually, now I think about it, it was so easy to cast!

For me, one of the best things about the process has been working so closely with Bennett’s text. Bennett can make you laugh out loud and he can make you cry, but what makes him special is that he can do these two things sometimes in the same line: for example when Mrs. Lintott says, “What is history? History is women following behind with the bucket.”

Oh yes, and working with the actors, both teachers and students, has been sort of OK too. Love you dahlings, love your work!

John Grime

The History Boys will be performed in The Memorial Hall, Sunday 29th and Monday 30th June, 6:30pm. Tickets free.

NB: Some content may offend and is not suitable for students below Year 9.

Link to FUSION 2014 Photographs: Copy the link into your browser              https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B-rM6NJVWAmUanpmT3RCWjhzdVE&usp=sharing

Entry for the 2014 FOBISIA Short Story Writing Competition with the theme of ‘Magic?’ is now open.

Once again there are 2 divisions, running in the same format as previous years.

Primary (Year 3-6)  600 word limit

Secondary (open)  1000 word limit

Shrewsbury International School Senior entries are due on March 21st.

See your teacher for details.

See this Blog’s posts on last year winners. You can also download the  2010 and 2011 Ebook.

30 Tips for Short Story Writing

  1. Read good short stories by good short story writers. Ask a librarian or your teacher for suggestions.
  2. Write in the third person unless a really distinctive first-person voice is irresistible.
  3. Never use the passive where you can use the active. The man was bitten by the dog. (passive)The dog bit the man. (active). The active is better because it’s shorter and more forceful.
  4. Give your story a title sooner than later. Change it later if you wish. Consider a title that is surprising or creates mystery.
  5. Try to use fewer words than more when describing something. Don’t go into great detail. Make every word count. Don’t give detailed descriptions of characters, especially their physical appearance. You can reveal more about character in dialogue.
  6. Don’t open the story talking about the weather.
  7. Write about what you know, things you’ve experienced – but don’t be afraid to use your imagination to help bring the reader into your world.
  8. Don’t use anything other than ‘said ‘to carry dialogue or be very sparingly with alternatives. “Donna,” I said, “I’d better go.”
  9. It is vital that the opening sentence and paragraph grab the reader’s attention.
  10. Avoid overly long sentences, although variation in the length of sentences can be effective as well.
  11. Never modify ‘said’ with an adverb. For example ‘said admiringly’.
  12. Don’t use exclamation marks or if you do, use only one!
  13. Avoid clichés and common expressions such as ‘all hell broke loose’, ‘he went ballistic’ etc and words like ‘suddenly’ and ‘dramatically’.
  14. Use dialogue as a form of action and to advance narrative (the story).
  15. Read your story aloud to be sure of the rhythm of the sentences. Listen to what you have written. If it doesn’t catch your imagination, only your mum will want to read it. Write a story you’d like to read.
  16. Don’t edit until you have finished your first draft – just write it. Have a complete break between completion and editing.
  17. Reread, rewrite, reread & rewrite again. A well written story is seldom found in the first draft. Cut until you can cut no more Less is always better. Always. What is left often springs to life.
  18. Never use ‘then’ as a conjunction – use ‘and’. Don’t use too many ‘ands’.
  19. Interesting verbs and adjectives are seldom interesting.
  20. Use metaphors and similes sparingly. Use one you’ve never heard before.
  21. Trust your reader. Not everything needs to be explained.
  22. Try to capture the reader’s interest and, empathy for, your characters.
  23. Don’t repeat a distinctive word unless you want to create a specific effect.
  24. Pay attention to names of characters and places (Dolores Haze), although don’t make them improbable either (Renesmee).
  25. Try to build your story around a key question.
  26. Every sentence should do one of two things –reveal character or advance the action.
  27. Every character should want something, even if it is only a glass of water.
  28. Almost never use a long, technical, or obscure word if a short word will do.
  29. Take a notebook to somewhere public, like the library, a sports field or canteen: Listen to how people really talk, what they say. Write down your favourite sentences you hear and use them in your story.
  30. Follow all, some or none of the above. Have your own style.

For further information see this short video http://video.openroadmedia.com/b7ai/authors-on-writing-short-stories/